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This is brilliant, again.

this would read better with some punctuation.. just a comma to break it up and let the reader breath.. and a couple of capitals to neaten it up :]

The rain at night
rocketed through galaxies
of cities,
electric cosmos spread
from every corner of the sky.
:iconlesucredepasteque:
Ah thank you so much for the amazing comments and suggestions :heart:

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